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Sat, Jan. 24th, 2004, 09:13 pm
xrubberxduckyx:

poem...jotted it down on a napkin in a restaraunt...wondering if it's any good:


if I were a painter
I’d paint you up red
the color of heart
the color of interest
the color of fire
I’d paint your eyes blue and your hair
green
and you’d be my masterpiece
my love on a canvas
no brush would do
so I’d use my fingers
lapsing back to innocence
or kindergarten, at least
if I were a painter
I’d paint you up red
the color of heart
the color of desire
The color.


ps> if members have friends on lj interested in writing, please please please spread the gospel of writing_goddess

Sat, Jan. 24th, 2004 07:35 pm (UTC)
purp1e_h4ze

"my love on a canvas
no brush would do
so I’d use my fingers
lapsing back to innocence
or kindergarten, at least"

i like the imagery, and i like the way you think about it. this poem is pretty because it says perfectly we look for and cant find in others. you should give this to some guy you like, i think hed be flattered.

Sun, Jan. 25th, 2004 10:05 am (UTC)
xrubberxduckyx

haha....maybe i will

then again, maybe not.

Sun, Jan. 25th, 2004 06:07 pm (UTC)
strube

you probably dont know me. im laura. i go to glass, etc, etc, etc. i stumbled across your lj and i read some of your short stories, and they're good.
i have to say, you remind me a little bit of myself last year. i was the lonely freshman who had (still has) all older friends, who wrote poems and stories to illustrate my life..

anyways, good luck. you've got a lot goin for you.

Sun, Jan. 25th, 2004 07:34 pm (UTC)
xrubberxduckyx

hm...laura what?

thanks.

Mon, Jan. 26th, 2004 01:38 pm (UTC)
strube

...strube? haha

Tue, Jan. 27th, 2004 08:20 pm (UTC)
purp1e_h4ze

strube!!!

yo
its andrew mays
sup?
i htink i was in malcoms calss with you. and haybarger. a-hah.
peace